Talk:Calixta Ratih Aldaine/@comment-28119250-20200523081647

Good character, might I suggest a few things tho?

- It's called the New Year's War, not New York War

- The military usually handles trainings, since the 210ths purpose is to train cadets until they get sorted into regiments.

- "She was found by even the most deadliest marksmen to be 'twice, if not more, than deadly'." Might i suggest changing this over to: For her age, she was found to be one of the deadliest marksmen, impressing even seasoned veterans. This fact lead to her being recommended into the 210th Soviet Corps